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小学生作文评语
更新时间: 2021-02-28 09:38:48  

1、通过仔细观察,采用了合适的语言把绘声绘色地描述了出来,文章虽短但不显单调,语言通俗但不失风趣。

2、对人物的语言,神态,动作等,进行精心细腻的描绘,这是的一大特色。结尾令人饱含期待与热情,言已尽,意犹未了。

3、文章开头简而得当,通过环境描写来衬托人物心情,十分艺术化。

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